Plot - The Snowflake

The One Sentance:

A disinherited son of a hotel owner fights the rise of evil in a crumbling port town.


The Paragraph:

Background and setup: Lowermouth is a decaying and isolated port town dominated psychologically by an underpinning and subliminal presence of evil, and physically by a giant hotel. 

Disaster 1: The hotel's owner dies, unexpectedly leaving it to a Belgian cousin (Maes), and the protagonist (Michael) is left suddenly disinherited, and forced to the fringes of the town.

Disaster 2: Town's folk are in shock, many expecting Michael to 'do something'. Michael retreats into isolation until persuaded otherwise by a disaster.  

Disaster 3: Michael acts, the town rises, but it is a fiasco. Commit, or not commit. Hiding in the marsh, Michael discovers his true grit.

The End: Raid, help from unexpected quarters, Hotel burned. X free, but the subliminal presence is still there. Michael organises those who wish to leave, to leave, but most remain behind - they are too far gone.



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